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A common criticism of today’s audience is that they have a narrower attention span, but that is probably coming from someone more invested in the traditional and now somewhat obsolete methods of making entertainment.
It was an interesting element that came up in a TV podcast recently I listened to. They reviewed an episode of Law and Order: SVU, now in its 21st season. The comment was that the show is really dated but deliberately so, it provides an outlet for people that want a more traditional 80s or 90s format.
The bit that links back to your point is they noted how super rapidly the plot progresses. A crime run through to full resolution in court and a couple of soapy subplots all in 42 minutes. The argument being that rather than today’s output being aimed at those with a low attention span it actually asks for more time and investment.
The bit that links back to your point is they noted how super rapidly the plot progresses. A crime run through to full resolution in court and a couple of soapy subplots all in 42 minutes. The argument being that rather than today’s output being aimed at those with a low attention span it actually asks for more time and investment.
Yeah, that makes a lot of sense to me. I think storytelling has become a lot more precise overall, taking more time to develop the characters.
To get back to that point of 90% of heroes in NYC, yet no one shows up but Spidey
when the Vulture terrorizes midtown: The limitations of the title constrain some of
the story from making sense.
It is also in other mediums where the script you have to suspend some belief
and told to buy the setting. Like an actress playing a waitress yet lives in
some downtown apartment that would be beyond a waitress’s salary. The waitress
is really hot and you have to buy it that she is single and can’t find anyone for
a Saturday night date.
Or in the series Girls, where the Lena Dunham character pulls more cute guys
than her three fellow castmates who are conventionally way more attractive than her.
If you go by the TV sitcoms about NYC, you would think there are only a handful of
people of color living there and in the old Woody Allen movies NONE live in the
Upper West Side.
Also the horror movies where a bunch of teens are in a cabin in the woods, one of them
(usually the back guy is the first to go) is horribly murdered and the rest stay there.
I has all been spoofed and parodied, but you still have to laugh at some of this storytelling.
We are all Spidey-Man.
Show up regardless if no one else does.
How about when a new writer takes over a title and has to make his storyline fit the continuity of the title and previous writer?…
It used to be the job of the editor to make sure the new writer stuck to the proper continuity and didn’t suddenly make Peter Parker a married Asian woman.
Unfortunately, these days continuity is considered a hindrance, and in any event everything will be rebooted within 12 months, so who really gives a f**k?
How about when a new writer takes over a title and has to make his storyline fit the continuity of the title and previous writer?…
I just read Tynion’s first issue of Batman and I wish he could have ignored the previous run. Dead Alfred sucks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. don’t whine about spoilers. he died over a month ago in Tom(I like to fuck up/kill cherished characters) King’s last issue.
How about when a new writer takes over a title and has to make his storyline fit the continuity of the title and previous writer?
Obviously, since it is not their material in the first place, it really shouldn’t matter what the conditions are unless the writer is in demand and specifically sets those conditions. Obviously, if DC wants Bendis, then they will let him decide what approach to take on their characters.
But, if you’ve been handed The Outsiders after a successful run or get hired to write for SPAWN, and you aren’t a name writer, then you should see the storyline and characters you’ve been handed as advantages. Besides, most stories follow the same format and offer the same opportunities as original material. Even moreso since you don’t have to spend time introducing the characters or explaining their situations. You can just start telling the story.
Tynion is a breath of fresh air…
I just read Tynion’s first issue of Batman and I wish he could have ignored the previous run. Dead Alfred sucks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. don’t whine about spoilers. he died over a month ago in Tom(I like to fuck up/kill cherished characters) King’s last issue.
Huh. I love a lot of Tom King’s stuff, but that’s just silly.
Some concepts have been stretched that were better off left alone.
X-men 117 was a filler issue of Xavier’s younger days in Cairo. He met a Middle Eastern telepath and fought him on the astral plane and that should have been the end but the telepath was retconned as the Shadow King and so on…
The issue of Wolverine on his own vs. the Hellfire Club had him taking out a few henchmen and that was later developed into the Reavers which imho was unnecessary.
The Wolverine mini had Yukio and she later on became Lady Deathstrike…
Just my three complaints of stretching and milking dry storylines
Also…
There are so many titles on one character like Superman, Batman, etc.
Are they all in continuity. How many things can happen to Batman in one day? He is in his own title, the Grave mini, Detective, JLA,… Too much.
Like the old Authority and even JLA. How many disasters can happen to the Earth?
It gets ridiculous.
I was watching the Ds9 and how they handled the Dominion…
Babylon 5 was running at the same time and did their storytelling as an epic.
I only wished ds9 did the Dominion storyline like that.
The DS9 Dominion storyline is my favourite time in any Trek show, really, but it does fall short of what Babylon 5 achieved. But then, so does pretty much everything else.
There were a few episodes on ds9 about the Dominion that were good.
Like when Odo found his origin or the two parter where they planned
an armada attack and it backfired.
Thing is, for the material they had, they could have done more.
Interestingly, Stracynski said that Voyager had a great premise of being
in deep space with two crews joining and that could have been interesting
but Voyager was so/so…
If you have an ambitious premise the storytelling would then have to be ambitious
as well to do it justice. Star Trek shows as I mentioned, may have bit off more than
what they could chew as it were. Same with the Matrix and Neo’s situation and question of
predetermination and so on. Didn’t do it justice, but that is another posting…
I haven’t seen Discovery or Picard yet, but the storytelling is apparently more cinematic and action oriented than the 90’s series where the cast would posture humanist philosophy with a little adventure.
Now shifting gears…
How would your storytelling approach be to a character like Superman, Batman, or whoever? Not exactly a reimagining per say… Personally, I would approach Batman with an emphasis on his childhood trauma. Miller did it in the original DKR but I wouldn’t devote pages on the murder flashback and Bruce waking up all the time…
I would insert a few scenes of him opening up to Alfred, Selina, and maybe a trusted therapist as Bruce Wayne. Not exactly like the Sopranos, but a little more balance between Bruce and his alter ego with action adventure etc…
Just saying.
How would your storytelling approach be to a character like Superman, Batman, or whoever?
I’d do the whole thing with sock puppets.
Not exactly like the Sopranos, but a little more balance between Bruce and his alter ego with action adventure etc…
Well, you know. A lot of scenes of Bruce talking about how bad it was to lose his parents would be both superfluous and boring – the old showing and telling thing again.
On the other hand, you could use conversations with a therapist in different ways, and it could be a lot of fun. Sopranos Batman actually seems like so obvious an idea that I wonder if it’s really never been done?
As for Superman, I would drop the Messiah sent to Earth material and take him as an immigrant adopted by Earth. He makes it his home and yet gets reminders of his Kryptonian heritage.
Luthor would not be obsessed with taking him down but be arrogant, greedy for power, and a humanist of sorts feeling that the world doesn’t need Superman as a protector.
I also feel there should be other notable enemies as a rogues gallery not exactly these grotesque monsters and Kyptonians, but… I ran out of ideas now… get back later
Sopranos Batman actually seems like so obvious an idea that I wonder if it’s really never been done?
The current Ellis/Hitch book, The Batman’s Grave is a little bit like that. A mixture of big action/superhero fight stuff and then quieter moments between Bruce and Alfred in the Batcave. Not exactly the same as a therapist, but he serves a similar function. As I guess he does in general in the batbooks.
I have seen the Grave, but didn’t collect the run so far
because I hate to say it, but I am a little fatigued of
seeing Hitch’s artwork all the time. I just need a little
break from it. Some follow a title because of the artwork,
others for the character, and like me for the overall storytelling
but I digress…
Usually a relatively weak character with no real powers but a
skill like archery, marksmanship, karate, has to make up the
“deficiency” of fantasy powers with more characterization. Green
Arrow comes to mind and a few others.
Back with more and feel free to chime in.
I have seen the Grave, but didn’t collect the run so far because I hate to say it, but I am a little fatigued of seeing Hitch’s artwork all the time. I just need a little break from it.
That’s fair enough. I recently got back into Hitch’s work in a big way and have reread a lot of his stuff lately.
Killing Alfred was bad. Bringing him back in a cop out way would be worse.
Got to reboot the whole thing…. again…
Killing Alfred was bad. Bringing him back in a cop out way would be worse.
Got to reboot the whole thing…. again…
That’s the whole problem with “killing” characters. You know their death is a stunt and they will be brought back in the near future. It’s all meaningless.
That’s the whole problem with “killing” characters. You know their death is a stunt and they will be brought back in the near future. It’s all meaningless.
You should amend that to “That’s the whole problem with Marvel and DC killing characters…”
That’s the whole problem with “killing” characters. You know their death is a stunt and they will be brought back in the near future. It’s all meaningless.
Yup and it seems King himself knew that very well. This is his telling of how it went:
“I got the opposite of push back. I got push forward. I sort of had this cliffhanger where Alfred, at the end, was gonna, could perish. And I put it in the script, like, of course we’ll figure this out later and he’s not dead. And DC’s like, ‘No, why isn’t he? Why’s he not dead?’ And I’m like, ‘Well, because he’s Alfred and he has to live forever because he’s a fantastic character.’ And they’re like, ‘No no no no, he’s dead.'”
The part about working out later that he’s not dead seems to be more about providing a get-out for a cliffhanger (ie. revealing that he never died when he had seemed to) rather than actually killing the character off and then inevitably resurrecting him later.
But the part about him having to live forever because he’s a great character seems to be an acknowledgement that, yes, he’s going to have to come back sooner or later.
Killing Alfred was bad. Bringing him back in a cop out way would be worse.
Got to reboot the whole thing…. again…
That’s the whole problem with “killing” characters. You know their death is a stunt and they will be brought back in the near future. It’s all meaningless.
Of course, that begs the question: if you keep Alfred dead, do you replace him with another character, or just leave his role empty?
Of course, that begs the question: if you keep Alfred dead, do you replace him with another character, or just leave his role empty?
Well obviously you replace him with his daughter, thus ensuring maximum free publicity as the Internet goes apeshit.
Alfreda?
Well obviously you replace him with his daughter, thus ensuring maximum free publicity as the Internet goes apeshit.
They kind of already did that at some point with Sasha Bordeaux… too bad some writers just didn’t know what to do with her and her story went nowhere, and then somewhere weird…
With DC characters being 70 years old, writers have to update them with the times. The Joker was just a clown criminal, now he is crazier and sadistic. Miller made Batman darker and brooding. Perhaps Superman’s character hasn’t changed much from being a Boy Scout but his powers have. I could go on with Green Lantern, Green Arrow, WW, etc…
Harley is fairly new, but iirc, she had more clothes originally… When was she sexualized?
Harley is fairly new, but iirc, she had more clothes originally… When was she sexualized?
When the New 52 came along.
I don’t know what the timeline is exactly, but it felt to me as though they took a cue from the Batman Arkham video games. That was the first time I came across that particular version of Harley, although it might be that there’s a precursor in the comics that I’m not aware of.
When was she sexualized?
Are you saying her original costume was not sexualized? more skin does not always mean more sexy.
Are you saying her original costume was not sexualized? more skin does not always mean more sexy.
Any excuse:
Superhero teams have a typical cast of characters for the writer to play with: the fearless leader, the strong guy, the acrobat, the flying guy, the energy/tech specialist, the antihero, the hot babe, etc…
With Alfred killed and Superman outing himself, has DC written themselves into a corner?
With Alfred killed and Superman outing himself, has DC written themselves into a corner?
Nah.
Things like that have occurred many times before and they have been undone. Nothing is truly permanent with the Big Two.
Nothing is truly permanent with the Big Two.
Remember when Peter and MJ were married, and then they weren’t? Or when Gwen Stacy was dead and then she wasn’t? Or when Norman Osborn was the Green Goblin and then he was dead and then he wasn’t and then he was the Iron Patriot and then he was the Red Goblin and then….
Nothing is truly permanent with the Big Two.
Remember when Peter and MJ were married, and then they weren’t? Or when Gwen Stacy was dead and then she wasn’t? Or when Norman Osborn was the Green Goblin and then he was dead and then he wasn’t and then he was the Iron Patriot and then he was the Red Goblin and then….
(Cough)X-Men(Cough)
plus, DC are probably due for a reboot any time now… that’s how they “fix” stuff =P
Re-rebirth?
plus, DC are probably due for a reboot any time now… that’s how they “fix” stuff =P
Re-rebirth?
New Birth?
Afterbirth.
King’s next big event. It will come out. people will be outraged. A beloved character will be dead or supremely damaged. King will come out and say that editorial is responsible.
Afterbirth.
King’s next big event. It will come out. people will be outraged. A beloved character will be dead or supremely damaged. King will come out and say that editorial is responsible.
Well, maybe not Didio now…
I did not know. I am sad when anyone loses their job and it appears to be sudden and mysterious. I was an avid critic of him and was a fan of very little that he did but imo, losing your job this way is wrong. I am going to edit the above post now.
I like the brief scenes that say a lot like the Deathstroke Wolverine scenes in the X-men/Teen Titans crossover back in the day, and some of the dialogue between Bats and Supes…
In DKR I liked Batman getting the street cred from that huge gang but then again he was down with a quasi skinhead group.
How would your storytelling approach be to a character like Superman, Batman, or whoever? Not exactly a reimagining per say… Personally, I would approach Batman with an emphasis on his childhood trauma. Miller did it in the original DKR but I wouldn’t devote pages on the murder flashback and Bruce waking up all the time…
Superman is interesting internally and externally. First, there is a pretty obvious conflict in that his experience and the experience of a normal person have nothing in common. So, the internal conflict is that Superman thinks he is a person. He thinks that his life as Clark Kent makes him human. However, he’s been infinitely more than human his entire life, so he’s simply blind to real human problems. He’d have to be confronted with that realization in the story. Often, whenever I see someone try to tackle Clark’s personality and vulnerabilities, it usually sounds like the sort of “weaknesses” or “mistakes” people will cite in job interviews. “Sometimes I care too much” sort of things. The truth is that a superman would not be able to understand the vast majority of human experience any more than a wild animal could.
Second, externally, I’d confront the character with the ultimate futility of his power. He can temporarily save the world from invaders and supervillains like Darkseid and so on, but he can’t really have any lasting effect on what he’s saving – humanity. Tied again into the fact that he is innately incapable of understanding the human experience. Like the “superman” Hugo Danner in Philip Wylie’s novel GLADIATOR said, “there is nothing I can do that many men working together with machines cannot do.” Superman can’t make the world a better place if people aren’t already willing to make it better without him.
So, initially, the first story arc would be Superman realizing the delusions of his life and of his personality. The second act would be Superman’s crisis point where he actively fights against that realization. He redoubles efforts to actually make a difference in the world – to leave a legacy for mankind – to be the Man of Tomorrow. However, again, his inability to understand the real human condition combined with the futility and ultimate danger of his power coming into confrontation with humanity’s incapacity for rapid “betterment” naturally leads to unexpected disasters and an even seriously more dangerous situation for the world. This leads Superman to double down on his efforts to succeed – bred out of the very inhuman fact that he never fails – until he’s betrayed every ideal, hurt everyone who he’s loved or who’s looked up to him and the worst that he’s feared has become a reality.
Then he leaves. He runs away.
So, there are two stories at this point. The world without Superman dealing with the fallout of his actions, and a fallen, broken Superman traveling the universe as a fugitive like Caine from Kung Fu. This is actually the most interesting section of the storyline and could last for a while, I think. One group of stories about a world where there was a Superman and where there still are super-people as well as super-technology that people are using (often against each other) dealing with the impact such a being would have left on it, and another story about Superman as something like an international man with no name – a wanted criminal to some and a divine savior to others – running away from a painful past but eventually learning to hope for and have faith in a better future that with all his power he cannot determine or control.
And, of course, that’s how he learns what it means to be human.
I’d read that. Well, I probably wouldn’t, because I don’t read superhero comics anymore. But I’d watch the movie :)
Cool.
Wolverine has been about balancing his sanity with his savagery, but can any more be done?
James Bond has been one dimensional in the Connery years and was given more in the Lazenby movie and more recently since Casino Royale, but does a fully emotional Bond work?
Multi-dimensional isn’t automatically emotional. I think giving Bond too many positive emotions is a mistake; he’s a broken man turned cynical killer, to me, and will always work best that way. That scene at the end of Spectre with him deciding not to kill the villain and throw away his gun was just groan-inducing to me. What’s the fucking point of that?
There are many kinds of character complexity. Skyfall had the most complete picture of Bond as a character, in its first half, before it sells out its themes to fucking nostalgia. Bond can be broken in all kinds of interesting ways. But he can’t be healthy, or able to love. That’s just not Bond, at least not for me.
There are many kinds of character complexity. Skyfall had the most complete picture of Bond as a character, in its first half, before it sells out its themes to fucking nostalgia. Bond can be broken in all kinds of interesting ways. But he can’t be healthy, or able to love. That’s just not Bond, at least not for me.
As Schopenhauer pointed out, love is like a natural disaster or illness. Not something to pursue nor does it usually end in happiness. The average person has a litany of romantic disasters before settling into their final, usually resigned to, relationships.
I remember one critic did an analysis of the basic Bond story as following the alchemical Great Work pursuing the unification – or “bond” – of the divided masculine and feminine elements of the character. So, in the end, it could be about a man incapable of love learning to love himself.
That is what I think has been missing from Wolverine’s storyline as Al-X mentions above. Though his relationship with Jean Grey – more of a non-relationship, actually – has been present, it didn’t really go anywhere. I was sorry to see that his romance with Mariko from The Wolverine was more or less absent in LOGAN. However, with all the time changing shenanigans in between, it’s hard to say if The Wolverine ever happened in the new timeline.
Logan has generally been a “man with no name” sort of character following in the footsteps of the warriors Tashiro Mifune and Clint Eastwood made famous. The movie LOGAN was a sort of combination of UNFORGIVEN, LONE WOLF AND CUB and THE OUTLAW JOSEY WALES.
However, there are a couple of approaches for Wolverine that would work for the character. First, he is a samurai or knight in search of a good lord. Xavier was that for him for most of the storylines. He needs that to both restrain and give direction to the brutality he carries with him. That, in itself, though is not enough to really save him. He really needs to find a way to stop hating himself or to stop seeing himself as solely an engine of violence. A romantic interest would serve that purpose – someone who values him for his ability to not simply protect others, but to care for them. It would be especially dramatic if those two drives – the service to the lord and the love for the lady – come into conflict as his pursuit of the latter makes him less useful or devoted to the former.
So, in the end, it could be about a man incapable of love learning to love himself.
That would be the end of James Bond, though. He could learn that only in his last movie.
As long as he keeps going, he can’t ever be whole.
I did have an idea for Wolverine a long time ago, but it is a little unworkable now since many stories, including the movies have done similar things.
Part 1
It would begin in the South Pacific during World War 2. The was a military doctor named Ishii who was something like the Japanese Doctor Mengele only far worse. He was interested in chemical weapons, but gas masks (and the wind) rendered them pretty much useless on the battlefield. So he developed an interest in diseases and weaponized Anthrax and Bubonic plague. He’d use Chinese civilians as test subjects for the diseases often killing entire villages with an outbreak. Later, he used American and British POW’s and this is where Logan would come in. As killing machine, he’s pretty impressive, but his superiors would send him on suicide missions and eventually he’s overwhelmed and captured. After his captors learn that he can survive anything without a scratch, he’s sent to Dr. Ishii’s camp to be the perfect immortal test subject.
Eventually, he escapes and kills everyone in the camp (including mercy killings of the other horribly suffering test subjects) except, knowing that the Japanese defeat is imminent, Dr. Ishii has already fled into hiding.
Part 2
A couple decades later in the late 60’s, Logan is basically muscle for hire and he’s paid by a shadowy ultra-right organization to take out a local group of leftist college kids who organize protests against the war and provide legal advice to civil rights activists. Logan ends up going berzerk on on one of the tougher kids, a hippie who looks like Jesus but fights like James J. Braddock. He jams his claws into the kid’s heart and figures he’s facing a murder rap, but the kid don’t die. Instead, he heals instantly, and juvenile bone claws emerge from his hands. From the kid’s reaction, Logan can tell this is the first time he’s had this happen and he realizes that this isn’t just a similar mutation. Under all that hair, the kid has his face. He’s some kind of copy.
Logan takes off, but he keeps an eye on the kid who he finds out is named Thomas Jones, is an orphan and a pacifist (even though he has a mean temper). Logan basically abducts Thomas and the kid’s girlfriend, Hannah, and they trace his background to find out who’s behind this. The search takes them on a trip across the country and down dead ends or half-leads to people like Mr. Sinister, a young version of the Spider-Man villain The Jackal and even The High Evolutionary. It also brings them into contact and sometimes conflict with Magneto and Professor X who both share somewhat anti-human opinions on the direction evolution should take.
Finally, the road ends with Dr. Ishii. Turns out the Doctor did not die or stay in hiding and instead has been working to create his ultimate weapon. He preserved samples of Wolverine’s tissue and has been experimenting on it to develop what he calls “human cancer cells.” Individuals who would be dispersed into the world to eventually destabilize it. Thomas was simply the baseline of the experiment. A functioning “cell” that could be slipped into society without notice. However, he was far from the only one. Thomas and Logan have to face an army of modified and monstrous clones and Thomas has to decide to fight and kill to save Hannah and his friend and father figure Logan.
As both men lay dying and wrecked by the effects of Ishii’s plague carrying monsters, the shadowy organization that originally hired Logan shows up. The organization reveals itself to be Weapon X.
Part 3
In the modern day, Logan is a member of the X-men still searching for answers about his past. He runs into an old woman who calls him “Thomas.” This is Hannah and she tells him the story. She also tells him that Logan died in Ishii’s lab years ago. She saw it. He’s not who he thinks he is.
So, the rest of the story would be Logan questioning whether he really was this unstoppable killing machine about whom over a century of stories have been told or if he’s really this sweet kid who wanted to make the world a better place, had a person he really loved in his life and would only fight to save people he cared about. And he has to ask the question if Charles has known this all along.
That’s also a pretty neat idea for a story. I like it. It’s a bit early Alan Moore Miracleman/Swamp Thing but the other way around.
A slight mention of Batman:
If Bruce fully addressed his trauma he would also add more dimension to his character and that would end him. Partly why he will never marry Selina and give himself to her completely.
That is an interesting thing about Batman. If Bruce didn’t have the trauma driving him, it’s not like he would stop being Batman. Instead, he’d be Doc Savage.
The interesting viewpoint that the Gotham series took was that Batman is Bruce addressing his trauma. Instead of Batman leading to crazy costumed criminals, the mad crimelords led to Batman. He was the sane one and his “theatrics” were designed to counteract and intimidate the criminals who were running wild before he arrived. What seems patently insane in dressing up as a bat and fighting crime is actually a sane and carefully thought out approach.
What would be interesting is to see an arc where Gotham City actually cleans itself up and how Bruce would respond to a town that no longer needs Batman. How would he react to actually winning the war on crime?
Bruce from Gotham would leave and go find a new city that needs help knowing that Gotham would be in the capable hands of Commissioner Gordon.
The current run in Batman written by Tynion actually has Bruce Wayne spending billions to rebuild Gotham City. Obviously it does not go well.
Bruce from Gotham would leave and go find a new city that needs help knowing that Gotham would be in the capable hands of Commissioner Gordon.
Or, like Doc Savage, he would stay based in Gotham but seek out cases around the world. It is interesting how Gotham is a part of Batman. Bruce has tight roots with the city – and for a while there was even a supernatural connection between the Waynes and Gotham City in the stories. I once theorized that a big part of Wayne Industries construction in the city was to basically create city structures that Batman would use to get around the city or spy on criminals.
It would be funny if some new engineer came to Gotham and was astonished at the building standards required for any construction.
“Jesus Christ, flagpoles on the sides of buildings have to be rated to hold six hundred pounds? And why does ever building have to have a three foot wide ledge every twenty feet?”
Seriously, though, considering Wayne’s dominance of the city’s economy and infrastructure, it would only make sense that Bruce would use that to build rooftop pathways, special tunnels, secret caches of supplies (or even a first aid station) and ambush blinds as well as use construction to insert cameras and mics in all the locations villains might gather. I’m surprised I haven’t see that in a story.
Seriously, though, considering Wayne’s dominance of the city’s economy and infrastructure, it would only make sense that Bruce would use that to build rooftop pathways, special tunnels, secret caches of supplies (or even a first aid station) and ambush blinds as well as use construction to insert cameras and mics in all the locations villains might gather. I’m surprised I haven’t see that in a story.
In Batman #666, the first Damien-as-future-Batman story, the defeat of the villain hinges on something similar, with Batman having essentially rigged the entire city.
Got some interesting Batman-related questions in my Quora feed:
Which crimes would Batman be charged with if he was real and operated in your jurisdiction?
Obviously, assault, potentially kidnapping and abduction, terroristic threatening and most often, trespassing. Carrying concealed weapons, of course, and disturbing the peace. Probably speeding, too, since his car has a rocket engine. Also, has that car been inspected for emissions regulations (a big thing in California)? Likely in violation of all sorts of legally enforced vehicular standards there. Flying without a license too, unless he produces one and identifies himself, but you need FAA authorization and have to log flight paths and so on. Destruction of property as well even if he didn’t directly cause it but he was involved in it.
However, vigilantism itself is not a crime or legally defined. In California, there is penal code section 837 allowing citizen arrest: “a private person may arrest another: 1) for a public offense committed or attempted in his presence. 2) when the person arrested has committed a felony, although not in his presence. 3) when a felony has been in fact committed, and he has reasonable cause for believing the person arrested to have committed it.”
Also, it is important to remember that in the U.S., at least, police officers actually don’t have any more rights or authority than citizens except when they abuse their position, it often is ignored or even encouraged by the city authorities. So, theoretically, a person could do anything a police officer could – except in the case of carrying weapons in certain places that otherwise prohibit it.
It is illegal to perform surgery without the patient’s permission unless ordered by the court, and most often this is because the patient’s life requires it. Such as treatment ordered for minor children of Christian Scientists. Ordering invasive brain surgery on an unwilling prisoner because he is a danger to others was done in the past, but I doubt it would get much traction today. Now, there is even the question whether anyone could be sure that the person they are holding is actually THE Joker or an imposter/patsy pretending to be the Joker. Even if they managed to fix the actual Joker, there could be someone out there even worse ready to take up the name and appearance.
This does get into the legality of arrest in all the cases of many superheroes. I think an early Spider-Man story had the teen webslinger stopping a robber, but when the police showed up, the criminal claimed that he was attacked by this weird masked freak. It was just Spidey’s word against his and the cops weren’t too keen on listening to some weirdo in flashy tights.
Let’s say Batman brings in some masked criminal. Well, what’s the evidence? How do you even know the guy behind the mask is the wanted criminal? If Batman actually foils a crime, then what are the charges and how can a case be built from evidence the police did not gather? I think the reason Batman keeps running into the same foes is that the Gotham D.A. can never put together a case. However, I imagine Batman’s biggest fans are defense attorneys raking in a fortune getting guys like the Penguin, Joker and Catwoman out of jail against such flimsy cases.
Speaking of Batman and arrests:
Batman is put on trial for all of his vigilante actions, what would his defense be?
I personally argued jury nullification. They might argue that Batman felt a moral obligation since law enforcement had failed.
His defense would be the best money could buy.
Seriously, though, a prosecutor could equally make the case that Batman’s extensive criminal career continuously took up valuable investigative resources, violated the suspects rights to such an extent that they could not be prosecuted and often put innocent people in mortal danger.
Batman’s obvious defense would be that he is not Batman. Bruce Wayne is an incredibly wealthy, obviously incompetent millionaire who’s incredibly clumsy and can barely walk through a door without spraining an ankle. Meanwhile, as he’s on trial, he’d have paid or had any number of his accomplices out there dressed as Batman and continuing his activities so that his defense could say if this man is Batman, then who the hell is the guy dressed as a bat driving the Batmobile past the courthouse this very moment?
This does get into the legality of arrest in all the cases of many superheroes. I think an early Spider-Man story had the teen webslinger stopping a robber, but when the police showed up, the criminal claimed that he was attacked by this weird masked freak. It was just Spidey’s word against his and the cops weren’t too keen on listening to some weirdo in flashy tights.
I used to love that stuff in the early Lee/Ditko Spider-Man comics. There was one where he breaks up a bunch of robbers outside a jewellery store who are about to break in, but they point out that they hadn’t actually done anything wrong at that point, so they call a cop over and complain about Spidey harassing them.
I personally argued jury nullification. They might argue that Batman felt a moral obligation since law enforcement had failed.
That would be a very good way for Batman to get off, but jury nullification is not a legitimate defense. It’s not recognized as an actual thing in legal terms. Also, it is very, very hard to get anyone to sit on a jury who would even consider jury nullification as lawyers have long prepared questions to weed those people out. “Have you ever been rescued by Batman or are you close with anyone who has been? Have you ever been threatened by one of Gotham’s many colorful crimelords? Have you ever purchased a Batman or Batman associated costume for your child on Halloween?” At the same time, it would be almost impossible to actually fill a jury with people from Gotham who have not been saved by the Batman since he’s saved the city multiple times.
The case the prosecution would have to make is that Batman actually only saved people his own actions had put in danger. That the vigilante’s entire modus operandi was to make himself look like a hero when he was actually a narcissistic and sadistic millionaire dressing up in fetish gear and getting sexual gratification beating up underprivileged, stigmatized and often mentally ill men and women in Gotham’s most poverty stricken areas. It would be a good case to make, too. The history of vigilantism in America is most associated with racist mobs attacking minority groups, lynching poor blacks, massacring Chinese and Mexicans and even persecuting the Mormons. Batman’s story is just a modern day retelling of The Clansman (aka Birth of a Nation).
It is actually against the law for an attorney to positively suggest that jury nullification is an option in court or during trial – they could be disbarred or even charged with a crime. Jury nullification exists only as a logical conclusion of the fact that a juror cannot be punished for their decision and a defendant cannot be tried for the exact same crime twice. However, the D.A. can anticipate this by being ready to charge Batman with other crimes in future trials, and honestly, a juror is more likely to not come to a decision than declare a person not guilty in spite of the fact they obviously broke the law.
Now, I still think arguing that Bruce Wayne is not Batman is a strong approach since it would be very hard to prove that he is. Even if the authorities discovered the Batcave under Wayne Manor, Bruce could argue he had no idea it was there and is very concerned that he was living over such a notorious vigilante’s hideout all this time. Now, Bruce would have needed to anticipate this and made sure that, first, he never seemed like he could be the Batman and, second, that he publicly expressed contempt and disdain for the hero whenever the topic came up. That way he’d have a record of being opposed to Batman and his war on crime.
Conversely, Bruce could reveal that even though he is not Batman, the Batman is actually the Batmen. His attorney could argue that police corruption was so widespread and actual police service so poor, he was forced to put into place an extensive private security service to protect his financial interests – interests that kept the city running – at his own expense. The Batmen were doing only what the police should have been doing, and if any laws were broken, it deserves nothing more serious than a large fine. On top of that, he could argue that the cases where this or that Batman seemed to spin out of control were due entirely to the absence of any confidence in police response. Where were the police during all this? Why didn’t they respond to an explosion in the warehouse district until an hour after Batman stopped Solomon Grundy? It’s not Bruce Wayne or Batman punishing the poor in Gotham but the neglect of the city itself that’s to blame.
There are also issues with the chain of custody for evidence and evidence tampering.
Cop: “Well, Batman gave it to me.”
DA: “And where did ‘Batman’ get it? How do you know he didn’t just make it himself to frame someone? How do we even know this is the real ‘Batman’ and not some crook fucking with you?”
Cop: “Uhhh…”
It could all be ruled inadmissible by a judge and sink the DA’s case.
And there’s a shitload of issues trying to subpoena the superhero and should they actually show up, when they get on the stand.
It doesn’t take much scratching at the surface to see how completely and totally unrealistic superhero vigilantism is, superpowers aside. About 99% of all criminals captured by a superhero would (and should) actually go free.
Are there too many characters being introduced and not utilizing the ones that are currently around?
I heard a comment like that with regards to the new Joker sidekick Punchline. It was said that Harley’s situation was messed up by the writers, so they unnecessarily made a new girlfriend for the Joker.
It reminds me of the 90’s when the X-men were churning out mutants like Maggot etc.
Marvel has over 6,000 characters in their universe. Don’t need more.
As for the big 2, they should show their resourcefulness and make the most of what they have.
I would put this in the Star Trek threads but it belongs here as well…
From the little I have seen of Star Trek Discovery and Picard, the writers this time have abandoned the
90’s format of all this posturing and humanist philosophy for more darker, daring adventure… Never quite
seen 7 of 9 like this…
Then again Babylon 5 at the time was more daring in their storytelling and if Star Trek was like that we wouldn’t
have needed B5. Imagine what the Dominion War would have been like…
Just saying…
I would put this in the Star Trek threads but it belongs here as well…
From the little I have seen of Star Trek Discovery and Picard, the writers this time have abandoned the
90’s format of all this posturing and humanist philosophy for more darker, daring adventure… Never quite
seen 7 of 9 like this…Then again Babylon 5 at the time was more daring in their storytelling and if Star Trek was like that we wouldn’t
have needed B5. Imagine what the Dominion War would have been like…Just saying…
Honestly, The Orville is more Star Trek than current Star Trek is. While it does have some running plot threads, each episode is pretty standalone.
There is a question of “core” of the story. A creative team can come on to a series or book and change it entirely but in an essential way that is a completely different title. Like with the X-Men, you can tell a serious science fiction story with those characters, but the core of the story – like most Marvel comics – is about the experience of adolescence. Which is why Marvel comics totally captured the teenaged boy audience in the 70’s and 80’s.
However, if a writer or publisher wants to expand beyond that audience, then sometimes the core of the story actually has to change. Now, no one ever went broke exploiting teenage anxiety and angst – that’s the bread and butter of the YA fiction industry. However, you can’t treat a series like Power Pack exactly the same as X-men. The real world problem there is that when you’ve found success appealing to such a specific audience, it is hard to get writers to not write to that audience even when it’s not the best thing for the title.
There is some good advice for writers to write stories that they want to read or see. However, like most good advice and conventional wisdom, it’s usually either wrong outright or take wrong. It’s more true to say that writers do their best work when they write stories that they want to write which is so obvious that it is almost a stupid thing to say.
Obviously, 99% of the people behind comics, children’s books and YA novels are much older than their core audience. That has always been true. In many cases, like Winnie the Pooh, Alice In Wonderland and the Harry Potter series, the authors were writing the stories at first for an audience of children they knew. Still, that doesn’t mean you need to do the same thing. Philip K. Dick, Frank Herbert, H. P. Lovecraft and Robert E. Howard wrote stories that they knew would be read and loved by mostly teen boys. They just knew their audience, and they had read those types of stories religiously when they were boys so they understood what they were making. The main difference, I think, is that they understood it from an adult perspective. That’s the main advantage I think adult writers have when writing for young audiences. They have gone through it and so they can take what is a very present and distressing situation – the powerlessness of youth – and give it a shape in fiction. It’s not too off base to say that the fandom for writers like JK Rowling or JRR Tolkein is close to a child-parent relationship. Even though these may not be the stories or novels that the writer actually reads for their own pleasure, they still certainly can be the sort of stories that the writer enjoys writing.
With shows like Discovery or Picard, the audience certainly has changed as has the landscape. The Next Generation was certainly square in the middle of the “family” show audience – mainly a show parents could watch with their kids of any age. Now, though, that isn’t as certain or true anymore. The impression I get is that the new Star Trek shows take an approach to the material in much the same way Zack Snyder approached DC. Certainly, that is a shift from the core of the previous stories. However, that was already shifting with Deep Space 9 and Voyager, anyway. They retained the visual style but diverged greatly from the regular shape of a Star Trek story. Picard and Discovery seem to also diverge from the visual style as well.
A slight note here, visual style is as important or even more important than story style even in comics. Image is often criticized because it seemed to emphasize visuals over story – but that was usually its strength, not a weakness. On top of that, going back and reading Cyber Force, Maxx, Pitt, Spawn or WildCATS even at the beginning, they really weren’t written any worse than any other comics on the stands at the time… or honestly most comics today. The division of great, good, mediocre and bad writing is fairly consistent in any medium. Even with the incredible expense of making a movie, you still get the same number of bad and mediocre whether they cost a billion dollars to make or a hundred thousand. Of course, the quality of the story hardly ever relates to the financial success anyway.
Nevertheless, a writer should really strive to be authentic and original since hack work never gets past the gatekeepers who can get a comic published, movie made or television show produced.
To go back to Power Pack, it still has a lot of potential as a concept for Marvel. Runaways and NYX were like a modern reimagining of that title, but it was also something like it’s own thing and the characters were a bit older than the Power Pack. There is an established world struggling to deal with people developing superpowers. The truth about the Marvel universe is that most people who develop superpowers don’t use them for good. The number of supervillains far outweighs heroes, and many of those heroes are in the employ of organizations whose interests are not necessarily altruistic. To take the perspective of elementary school kids in that world – rather than teenagers – is not something many people have done before or since. It wasn’t that novel a concept in the 80’s and 90’s though with little kids showing up a lot in horror movies, action films and sci-fi adventures. Everyone remembers Newt from Aliens and the big one, Eliot from ET. Power Pack was pretty popular and still gets a positive reaction from comic book fans. I never felt that it really took the perspective of the kids as much as it should, but I think it would be a better title to release today than another title like New Warriors.
I would put this in the Star Trek threads but it belongs here as well…
From the little I have seen of Star Trek Discovery and Picard, the writers this time have abandoned the
90’s format of all this posturing and humanist philosophy for more darker, daring adventure… Never quite
seen 7 of 9 like this…Then again Babylon 5 at the time was more daring in their storytelling and if Star Trek was like that we wouldn’t
have needed B5. Imagine what the Dominion War would have been like…Just saying…
Honestly, The Orville is more Star Trek than current Star Trek is. While it does have some running plot threads, each episode is pretty standalone.
Anyone who thinks modern Star Trek isn’t doing the same posturing and humanist philosophy as before is doing a surface reading of the work at best.
Interesting. Mentioning the core of the story. To run with it: Star Trek was
Roddenberry vision but is it now?
What makes for good Star Trek? Is it good if it adheres to Roddenberry’s wishes and
his storytelling?
The audience and world has changed since the 60’s series as that was
50 years ago. To get back to the 90’s and ds9, even the fans at that time wanted the
franchise to take more chances and some even preferred (gasp!) B5 to ds9.
Abrams “revived” it in 2009 with the movies but was that really Trek or Fast and Furious in Space?
It is debatable.
I have to say that stories, arcs, etc. have a beginning, middle, and end. To prolong
and stretch a certain style is really doing the story and audience a disservice. ie
Claremont’s X-Men imho, was best with Byrne and it came to its end, but I have to say
that it was stretched and milked dry. Morrison ended his run just right. But if you look
at how that title has changed from Stan Lee writing it…
As for Star Trek, maybe they should rest the whole thing like they should also do with Star Wars
Hope I did not go all over the place… Cheers.
Gene Roddenberry wasn’t involved in the Trek movies past the first, which was a disaster largely because of his bullshit. And he was gone form TNG by the end of the second series – you know, when people generally agree it went from good to great.A huge part of the way he’s been lionised is him bigging himself up in interviews, and people taking it at face value. While he definitely had his heart in the right place – Trek’s morality plays are still generally progressive even by modern standards, a huge amount of Trek’s lasting success is entirely by accident and crazy risks playing off.
The original Trek series ironically seemed to have more balls than the first couple seasons of the Next Generation. After Roddenberry departed, it did take on more dramatic shape and became its own sort of classic. Where I think today’s Trek has suffered most were in the new movies. The first one was a successful and enjoyable film, but it didn’t really feel like a core Star Trek story. The third film actually felt more like an episode of Star Trek than any of them, but it was the least successful.
Orville is certainly entertaining and interesting in the same way the Next Generation was, but it is sort of like a Marvel approach while the actual Star Trek series are taking a more serious DC approach.
On another storytelling topic, I wonder what sort of stuff will come out after this? Right now, it seems like movies like CONTAGION and CARRIERS are getting viewed more now than when they came out.
That’s an interesting thing about Hollywood. I remember a friend and I pitched a movie about a guy who discovers a machine that can control the weather and ends up creating a super-storm. The producer, at Disney, passed because it was just after Hurricane Katrina. However, not soon after that, there were a bunch of movies about hurricanes and storms. Same with 9-11. Before that, few movies with buildings being knocked over. After that, it wasn’t much of a spectacle unless a building got knocked over.
Movies provide a comfortable form or structure to what in real life is chaotic and traumatic. I was rewatching parts of Shin Godzilla a few days ago and it actually had more resonance now for me. In Japan, certainly, after going through an earthquake, tsunami and nuclear meltdown at Fukushima, I can see why they were captivated by it, but it certainly picks up on elements of the pandemic everyone is facing today.
First season of TNG was probably the worst, but that could have been them just getting their bearings. Still, no excuse for this:
https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/Code_of_Honor_(episode)
To prolong and stretch a certain style is really doing the story and audience a disservice. ie Claremont’s X-Men imho, was best with Byrne and it came to its end, but I have to say that it was stretched and milked dry.
I strongly disagree. Claremont’s vision was of an ongoing story where characters changed considerably, where they could be written out entirely and replaced, everything continue to move on. It was entirely geared for the long form of many years and that’s what sold it. A majority of the adaptations of the work use concepts that came after that run, the evolution of Magneto, God Loves, Man Kills, Wolverine mini with Miller, #268 that reveals Wolverine’s longeivity and role in WW2.
Now subjectively it’s perfectly reasonable to think the Byrne issues were a creative highpoint but they weren’t the high point of X-Men’s popularity. During the Dark Phoenix Saga sales were around 170,000, this continued to increase and in the late 80s and early 90s averaged closer to 450,000 (I’m not going to include the speculator driven relaunch). That’s a sign that the ongoing soap opera was a major factor in driving those sales up, it is not replicated across the industry by other books.
Claremont left when the popularity hit a level where he was no longer allowed to either control the direction or make significant changes and that was the end of that but I believe the entire nature of it being a long running saga, with perceptible change missing in most comics, is what made it so popular and dominate the industry at the time.
I strongly disagree. Claremont’s vision was of an ongoing story where characters changed considerably, where they could be written out entirely and replaced, everything continue to move on.
That was an interesting point during the period of the 70’s, 80’s and 90’s. Comics were about to go out of business several times so the fact that the X-Men and Teen Titans suddenly broke out as big sellers and brought a lot of interest back to the medium and superheroes pushed a lot of innovation… until it didn’t. X-men particularly changed the standards as it was about the situation changing as the book went on. Characters would drop out and new characters would come in.
It is interesting at DC, there was this 5G idea that would put young descendants of the heroes in the place of the current classic roster, but that’s really what should have happened with the first Crisis. Instead of Supergirl, Superman should have died and she should have become Superwoman, the most powerful hero on Earth, just like Kid Flash became the Flash. Bruce Wayne should have died or become incapacitated with Dick Grayson taking his place. Essentially, the Teen Titans should have become the Justice League.
Comics are in a similarly dire position now, it seems, so it makes sense they would start experimenting to see if they can make themselves relevant to young readers again.
In reply to Gareth…
Needless to say I am a HUGE fan of the Byrne/Claremont issues and
to a lesser extent the issues after Byrne. I have to say Claremont
at his best was that time. Sure the title became popular afterwards
but imho the quality of the storytelling was then. But I digress…
As for comics I can only hope that the companies stress quality storytelling and
less quantity of churning out so many titles for sales.
9/11 influenced a lot of stories that came afterwards.
Will this current pandemic do likewise?
9/11 influenced a lot of stories that came afterwards.
Will this current pandemic do likewise?
Unfortunately, yes.
9/11 influenced a lot of stories that came afterwards.
Will this current pandemic do likewise?
There are a million stand-up comedy routines about self-isolation, empty toilet paper shelves and key worker definitions being written across the world right now.
Needless to say I am a HUGE fan of the Byrne/Claremont issues and to a lesser extent the issues after Byrne. I have to say Claremont at his best was that time. Sure the title became popular afterwards but imho the quality of the storytelling was then.
Like I say, I am okay with that, it’s a perfectly valid opinion that those were the best issues.
That’s not quite the same as saying it was a case of staying on too long. For example this week I read two new X-Men books, the first was centred around the Brood from #155 (Byrne left in #143), the second around Scalphunter and events in the Mutant Massacre (#211). The Morrison run you mentioned began with a major part of the story centred around Genosha (#235). A central part of the Hickman Powers of X story is Nimrod (#191).
So that’s a rich vein of post-Byrne story ideas from Claremont still being mined. If he’d left with him I think it’s very valid to question whether the X-Men would have been at the industry leader it was or just been a ‘great run’ like Moench and Gulacy on Master of King Fu. The first X-Men film has Rogue as a very central character and the more complex version of Magneto as a Holocaust survivor. The sequel is a loose adaptation of God Loves: Man Kills. The Wolverine on his mini series with Miller. Logan features Caliban. All post-Byrne ideas.
Image Comics did that as well with books from SPAWN and SAVAGE DRAGON all the way up to INVINCIBLE telling continuous stories from the beginning. It’s likely there is no superhero title still being published that has had as long a continuity run as SAVAGE DRAGON.
9/11 influenced a lot of stories that came afterwards. Will this current pandemic do likewise?
Like I mentioned up the thread, I think a lot of end of the world movies are being watched right now and more will be made when they can start making them. Movies – or stories in general – can take a trauma and emotionally release it because fiction is essentially a lie. There is no such thing as realistic fiction because it will always give a structure and order to what in reality is formless, chaotic and random.
A lot of tension builds up over time waiting for the catastrophe to pass over, so it needs to be released, and you can do that watching Contagion, World War Z or even Shin Godzilla where the heroes find a way to overcome the disaster and the movie ends even though the trauma doesn’t in reality.
Shifting gears…
The comics storytelling era of the 90’s… Superman with a mullet… questionable artwork…
Was it really that bad?
I think the Image comics are underrated. Like Gar pointed out above, it may just be that Image wrote to the same adolescent male audience that had (and still has) supported brash superhero comics for decades while a lot of readers were gradually growing out of them. Honestly, except for a few really poor examples, there really was nothing in the writing that was any worse than superhero comics from Marvel and DC at the time nor really any worse than what we get today in most superhero comics. They just had more heat and testosterone.
Personally, I think a lot of DC and Marvel’s best stories today are riffs on stories that came out back then. Like you point out, the death of Superman and the reign of the Supermen. The Bane and Batman and Azrael arcs still cast a shadow over Batman comics today. Also, we got a lot of new heroes in the 90’s that were very popular, but kinda faded out later on (often because of the artist migration to Image). Venom is the most obvious character that stuck around, but there was Gambit, Kyle Rayner, Impulse, Jubilee and so on.
Will this current pandemic do likewise?
It feels like we very much anticipated it, with the zombie craze of the recent years.
9/11 influenced a lot of stories that came afterwards.
Will this current pandemic do likewise?
There are a million stand-up comedy routines about self-isolation, empty toilet paper shelves and key worker definitions being written across the world right now.
And being simultaneously shared across the world right now. When this is over, we’ll have heard every joke and funny anecdote. Any stand-up who tries to build a show on this material will fall flat on his face.
So you have to come up with a routine making fun of all the other stand-ups for doing lazy coronavirus jokes.
But what if everyone starts doing that?
It’s the end of comedy as we know it
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