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I’m not sure if anyone here was actually reading my Strikeforce story. If you were, you’ll know that I’ve struggled to maintain a regular update schedule over the last year or so.
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After a long delay, I have added the first chapter of the Egyptian story. Supporting it, I have the set of articles covering important people, places, dates, and things featured in the story. The links are all in the sidebar on the Egyptian index page.
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I know it’s not at all obvious why a modern-day super-hero saga has a chapter set in ancient Egypt.
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It started when I went back to the lost civilization of Atlantis, to tell a story that gave the origins of several things that played a big part in the Strikeforce story. A prequel, if you like.
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Once I had done that, I realised I could trace these elements through the next 12,000 years of history, and interweave other elements that didn’t stretch back as far Atlantis but still had origins in different historical eras.
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The first of these new eras was ancient Egypt. I’m not going to list all the elements that link this era to Atlantis and/or modern times, that would be spoilers. It should become clearer in subsequent chapters and/or background articles.
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This first chapter is a short introduction to the setting and the characters who will be your guides as these elements reveal themselves. And if I’ve written it well enough, I hope the story will be interesting in its own right even if you don’t see the big picture. And if you’re not interested in ancient Egypt, you can skip this entire section without affecting your understanding of the main Strikeforce story in any way.
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If you haven’t been reading it, none of the above will have made made any sense to you. If it’s made you interested, you should probably start on the home page, or maybe look at the first blog post which explained what the site was all about and what I was trying to do.
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If you’re thinking of diving in to it, though, I feel I ought to warn you that there are almost 300 pages and over 300,000 words on the site :mail: (and that’s just story pages, it’s not counting the 151 blog posts of behind-the-scenes waffle).

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  • #5043

    After a long delay, issue #28 of Heroes is ready: Down by the Sea.

    It’s part two of a two-part story, and if you can’t remember part one is issue #27 (I wouldn’t blame you, it’s been nearly a year), you should read that first: Under the Boardwalk. (See what I did with those titles? Oh, never mind then.)

    This is one of my favourite issues, because it’s a Chi-Yun story (though all the other characters get good bits) and I love writing for Chi-Yun.

    The usual set of background articles this week include pieces on Sergeant George Deiten, Franklin Marks’s House, the events of 4 September 1962, and the Brighter Media Group. As usual, these all have some relevance to the overall story (though not this actual issue), but if anyone can remember when and how they were introduced in the story, I’ll be astonished.

    Next update should be November 10th, and I’m fairly sure I’ll hit the deadline.

  • #5233

    Hey David, Is Heroes based on your RP group like Strikeforce was or is it original stories? i noticed Don and Major Democracy from Strikeforce but was not sure. I read your explanation for writing in script form rather than prose so it seems you enjoy writing in that form but have to say it doesn’t seem to be an easier style to read.

  • #5305

    It’s all based on my RPG. Heroes is a direct sequel to Strikeforce, but I’m writing them in parallel just to be confusing. I enjoy the challenge of providing hints of the Strikeforce history without too many direct spoilers!
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    After several years of the Strikeforce game I decided the universe had grown far too complex so ended it with a “crisis”, then restarted it as Heroes, set 20 years later in the same universe. The break was supposed simplify everything but inevitably it just got more complicated as bits of old continuity crept in. (Does this remind you of anything? :unsure: )
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    I do find it interesting writing it as a fake comic script, it lets me be lazy about descriptions but at the same time puts artificial restrictions on me (in pacing, etc.) that I wouldn’t get in prose. But I know not everybody like reading “raw” scripts, and with hindsight I wish I had done the whole thing in prose format. Though now I think I should adopt a completely different style for each “era” of the story. When I get to the Strikeforce of 1588 I might write it as a Shakespearean play.
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    Anyway, thanks for reading, I wasn’t sure if anybody actually was :)

  • #5745

    The hotly anticipated new Strikeforce chapter is here … and it doesn’t feature any members of Strikeforce! What madness is this, you ask? Read Strikeforce chapter 28: Time Again for the answers. (Disclaimer: answers not guaranteed.)

    And a short selection of background articles this week includes Fallen Star from the alternate future timeline, New Pittsburgh from the alternate future timeline, and the Star Guard (from the regular timeline).

    You can find it all from the “Last Site Update” links on the home page.

    Next week is a designated skip week, next update will be in two weeks and may or may not be another chapter of the Atlantis saga.

  • #7253

    This week we go back to the Altantis “prequel” story. In Chapter Three: The City our intrepid refugees finally reach the city of Kingsmount and … well, you’ll have to read it. Not much happens to be honest, they’re just walking around and talking to people.

    For those who wonder how this whole story is connected to Strikeforce, I can say that in this chapter you learn of one hugely significant link. I think I’ve made it obvious, but if not … well, it doesn’t matter, you still don’t need to read the prequel to understand Strikeforce, and you don’t need to know the link to understand Atlantis, they can be read completely independently.

    The city of Kingsmount gets an entry (and a map!) in the gazetteer, and there’s an encyclopaedia entry on Atlantean alchemy (which isn’t terribly important, to be honest, but I felt like writing it.

    That’s all for this week. Hey, maps take a long time to draw you know!

    Links to the new pages are prominently displayed on the home page as usual: http://dmheroes.co.uk/index.html 

     

  • #7342

    just read 28.  it looks like a crossover of some sort… or you just got several new players for your role playing group. Nice job with the parallel storytelling. Also, isn’t Strikeforce in the 20th century?

  • #7346

    All will be revealed next chapter… though I don’t know why I’m being coy, you’ve already figured out the answer :-)

     

  • #7903

    This week we are back with the Heroes story as we reach Issue 29: Maelstrom! James vs. a giant laser cannon. Who is your money on?

    Supplementary pages this week include a biography of Special Agent Tom Smith , who you’ve almost certainly forgotten but that doesn’t matter because he’s deceased anyway; a gazetteer entry for Harrison County, which is entirely pointless; and an encyclopaedia entry on the DICE plasma weapons , which may or may not be interesting to read but was fun to write. Sometimes I wonder if my quest to document everything is really sensible.

    There will be two skip weeks coming up, but I’ll aim to do one more update before the end of the year, on 22 December.

     

  • #19491

    Locked in the house, what can I do but add some new fiction to my web site?

    This week’s update sees a new Strikeforce chapter, New Beginning.

    This marked some significant shifts in how I ran the Game, which I’ll cover in detail in another post. But for now, I will just let the story speak for itself, as this chapter has Strikeforce trying to figure out their new status quo. Plus an epilogue you WILL NOT WANT TO MISS (trying to generate some hype there).

    If you haven’t been reading the story before, this might be a good starting point as there’s a lot of recapping what’s already happened.

    There are the usual new encyclopaedia and history pages, but none of them are really significant, they are just there for completeness really. They are listed in the update box on the home page of the site.

    I’ll aim at next Sunday for the next update. I’m pretty sure I should be able to manage it.

  • #20862

    Another week another update.

    http://dmheroes.co.uk/journal/post/2020/04/05/Update-71.aspx

     

     

  • #21698

    <p style=”color: #444444; font-family: calibri, arial; font-size: 14.6667px;”>Chapter 30 of Strikeforce introduces an important character to the universe (he’s only ever going to appear twice more, but he’s vital to the mythology, trust me). Plus: pirates! You really have to read By Hook or By Crook. Go on, it’s quite short.</p>
    <p style=”color: #444444; font-family: calibri, arial; font-size: 14.6667px;”>There’s also a biography of Aberdeen Angus (bonus points if you can remember his appearance in the Heroes story) and a really short write-up of the 24th century police headquarters. Finally, part of the slowly progressing reorganisation of the history pages bring an overview of the important events of pre-history.</p>

  • #21699

    Huh. Well, that’s annoying. Just go here to read it properly: http://dmheroes.co.uk/journal/post/2020/04/12/Update-72.aspx

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