FREE COMCIS (sorta..)THIS LAND all 5 issues of art and dodgy lettering

 

Hi team!
So all the art has been completed on THIS LAND (barr a couple of tweeks)

I would be really interested to hear everyones thoughts.

Its gone down really well with kids (especially kiwi kids)

And I’ve had a lot of interest from schools in NZ as well.

Currently siting with a couple of publishers who are trying to decide what to do with it.

either a 2 parter or a 130 page graphic novel

 

THIS LAND 1

-Complete with a few tweeks to come

THIS LAND 2

-in colour dodgy letters and edits to be done scribbled all over it

THIS LAND 3

-B&W dodgy letters by me

THIS LAND 4

-B&W dodgy letters by me

THIS LAND 5

-B&W dodgy letters by me

I basically need proof readers sense checkers did I leave a plot hole you could drive a bus through.

Again any help feedback is appreciated

• This topic was modified 4 years, 3 months ago by Mark Abnett.
• This topic was modified 4 years, 3 months ago by Mark Abnett.
• This topic was modified 4 years, 3 months ago by Mark Abnett.